Revision Planning #2 10/18/18

1.) I Feel pretty confident with Gee and his concepts. We have done enough work with him and it is easier to incorporate his work within my essay in an opposed to the others.

2.) It is easy, generalizing what each author has to say and what their perspectives are, it is just hard to incorporate my own personal perspectives with theirs sometimes. That’s working because it is more general than applying own view to The essay.

3. My body paragraphs need to have more intertwined perspectives because I am not explaining enough. To strengthen my essay, I just need to incorporate more of the authors, talk less about Gee and explain quotes more thoroughly.

4.) What I explain in my essay is that science is very constructed yet very loose at the same time. People have socially constructed norms and values that we prioritize and follow, but there are many different paths to achieve different Discourses.

 

 

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