Peer Review

“Identities can change based on academic levels and the different ways that a person perceives information. The way a student presents their findings and what they have learned can be different from the ways that their peers will present the information. In the IMRAD format it presents a certain pattern that the authors can present their information in. Depending on the author, “Each journal has its own style; but they all have their own Instructions to Author (or other word combinations to mean the same thing)” (Nair 13)” 

comment:

Samantha Gordon
I would suggest elaborating more on what those differences are to strengthen your claim.
“The way we present ourselves through language or just a presentation can show who we are and what our personality is. The way that people perceive us and how we perceive other information can change our style and they way that we present our ideas to others. A scientific Discourse can be shown through one’s identity when they are studying courses in the science field.”
comment: I would suggest elaborating more on what those differences are to strengthen your claim.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ymyiIMBK9c0UvqFZ_Gq2Iy3ItwQhZVJYpGz675zQZT0/edit?ts=5bcf36f7

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